Friday, 19 November 2010

Our Storyboard...

Further Developments:
As to be expected, the group has made a series of changes to the original storyboard, during the course of this project:

Making my way downtown (walking quickly down a busy street whilst singing)
walking fast
faces passed (two people walk past with particular emphasis on their faces)
and I'm home bound (significant object- key in front door)
Staring blankly ahead (close up of Melissa's face)
just making my way,

making my way,
through the crowd. (walking through a crowd)


If I could fall 

into the sky, (location: the woods)

do you think time would pass me by? (glancing at her watch or phone, anxiously)

'Cause you know I'd walk
a thousand miles
if I could
just see you...

Tonight. (walking down the hill into the sun)

And I need you. 
And I miss you. 

And now I wonder... (at home, sitting on bed, sifting through photos- looking sad)
It's always times like these 
when I think of you 
and I wonder 
if you ever think of me? (at the cafe sitting alone)
'Cause everything's so wrong 
and I don't belong 
living in your precious memories. (dramatically rips up photos, cards and letters)


If I could fall 
into the sky,

do you think time would pass me by? 
'Cause you know I'd walk 
a thousand miles 
if I could just see you... (at the pier, tracking shots, runs to the edge and looks into the distance)


'Cause I need you.
And I miss you.

And now I wonder... (in the streets, folk road)And I, I 
don't want to let you know.
I, I 
drown in your memory. 
I, I 
don't want to let this go. 
I, I don't... (on the pier, pan round her face as she falls to her knees)


Making my way downtown 
walking fast,
faces passed 
and I'm home bound.

Staring blankly ahead,
just making my way,
making my way,through the crowd. (looking out of the train window/shots in London)

And I need you. 
And I miss you. And now I wonder... (In London, walking across a bridge)

If I could fall
into the sky,

do you think time 
would pass me by? 
'Cause you know I'd walk 
a thousand miles 
if I could just see you... (in the park, with a lake, sees a boy in distance)

If I could fall
into the sky

do you think time would pass me by? 
'Cause you know I'd walk 
a thousand miles 
if I could 
just see you.
If I could
just hold you... (male and female characters approach each other)

Tonight. (hands slipping away/fade out)

I am really looking forward to watching the final product!

Lily-May Smythe

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