Further Developments:
As to be expected, the group has made a series of changes to the original storyboard, during the course of this project:
Making my way downtown (walking quickly down a busy street whilst singing)
As to be expected, the group has made a series of changes to the original storyboard, during the course of this project:
Making my way downtown (walking quickly down a busy street whilst singing)
walking fast
faces passed (two people walk past with particular emphasis on their faces)
and I'm home bound (significant object- key in front door)
and I'm home bound (significant object- key in front door)
Staring blankly ahead (close up of Melissa's face)
just making my way,
making my way,
through the crowd. (walking through a crowd)
If I could fall
into the sky, (location: the woods)
do you think time would pass me by? (glancing at her watch or phone, anxiously)
'Cause you know I'd walk
a thousand miles
if I could
just see you...
Tonight. (walking down the hill into the sun)
just making my way,
making my way,
through the crowd. (walking through a crowd)
If I could fall
into the sky, (location: the woods)
do you think time would pass me by? (glancing at her watch or phone, anxiously)
'Cause you know I'd walk
a thousand miles
if I could
just see you...
Tonight. (walking down the hill into the sun)
And I need you.
And I miss you.
And now I wonder... (at home, sitting on bed, sifting through photos- looking sad)
It's always times like these
when I think of you
and I wonder
if you ever think of me? (at the cafe sitting alone)
when I think of you
and I wonder
if you ever think of me? (at the cafe sitting alone)
'Cause everything's so wrong
and I don't belong
living in your precious memories. (dramatically rips up photos, cards and letters)
If I could fall and I don't belong
living in your precious memories. (dramatically rips up photos, cards and letters)
into the sky,
do you think time would pass me by?
'Cause you know I'd walk
a thousand miles
if I could just see you... (at the pier, tracking shots, runs to the edge and looks into the distance)
'Cause I need you.
And I miss you.
And now I wonder... (in the streets, folk road)And I, I
don't want to let you know.
I, I
drown in your memory.
I, I
don't want to let this go.
I, I don't... (on the pier, pan round her face as she falls to her knees)
Making my way downtown
walking fast,
faces passed
and I'm home bound.
Staring blankly ahead,
just making my way,
making my way,through the crowd. (looking out of the train window/shots in London)
And I miss you.
And now I wonder... (in the streets, folk road)And I, I
don't want to let you know.
I, I
drown in your memory.
I, I
don't want to let this go.
I, I don't... (on the pier, pan round her face as she falls to her knees)
Making my way downtown
walking fast,
faces passed
and I'm home bound.
Staring blankly ahead,
just making my way,
making my way,through the crowd. (looking out of the train window/shots in London)
And I need you.
And I miss you. And now I wonder... (In London, walking across a bridge)
If I could fall
into the sky,
do you think time
would pass me by?
'Cause you know I'd walk
a thousand miles
if I could just see you... (in the park, with a lake, sees a boy in distance)
If I could fall
into the sky
do you think time would pass me by?
'Cause you know I'd walk
a thousand miles
if I could
just see you.
into the sky
do you think time would pass me by?
'Cause you know I'd walk
a thousand miles
if I could
just see you.
If I could
just hold you... (male and female characters approach each other)
Tonight. (hands slipping away/fade out)
I am really looking forward to watching the final product!
Lily-May Smythe
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