This is the very first draft of my second ancillary task and I am well aware that there is a serious amount of work that still needs to be done. Unable to put my finger on it, I submitted it first to my teachers for feedback.
I have listened to my teacher's comments and have decided to act on them all. I agree with their improvements and have even noted a few of my own. My main concern is the key image; I think I am going to need to reshoot for a better photograph. I shall inform my group as soon as possible to organise a time and date that both Melissa and myself are available. The rest of the improvements should not take too long as soon as I have thought of a new design, this however cannot be done until I know which image I am going to use!
Lily-May Smythe
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